Spider took some time to decide the shape was inanimate. While he was thinking about it, a thick mist descended on the quarry, coating everything in glistening damp. He shrugged and shrugged again, sniffing at the air. Swaying, he cocked an ear to the rustle and creak of the trees.
On a path above him, Quinnell farted and laughed.
Putting the flashlight down for a moment, Spider patted the pockets of his canary yellow jumpsuit, eventually locating what he was after – a small wrap of paper. This he unpicked and held to his nose. He snorted hungrily.
Because, because, because there were shaky, angular shadows to be cast, work boots that needed crunching unevenly over the loose chippings, and oaths to be spoken.
A little further along the track, he wiped the aviator shades from his face and folded them into a top pocket. “Your move,” he shouted less than confidently, and rubbed the torch over his brow. There was no reply; Spider loathed silence. To his friends in the clubs he would say, “The thing about silence is it’s difficult to interpret, and near worthless as a commodity.”
He followed the curve of the path and approached the dark shape of the Rover. Because he wanted the answer to a question: who was responsible for running his beautiful claret-coloured 1966 Ford Mustang off the road?
Near enough to read the number plate he shouted in surprise. The car was as still and dark as a freshly dug grave. Spider stepped away smartly and played the torch beam over the immediate area. Including through the windscreen into the car’s cabin, which was empty. “Shit,” he said.
The track was about ten foot wide. A couple of feet to the right there was a steep drop to the next escarpment, to the left a vertical climb to more trees. Beyond the Rover, the track narrowed to little more than a footpath, hemmed in on either side by straggly-looking undergrowth. From there the path disappeared into the murk created by a stand of bushy evergreens. This seemed to be the only option as Quinnell’s hiding place. “I’m not going in there,” Spider mumbled. Wind and the drizzle slicked his black hair to his face.
There was a movement in the evergreens – a slight swaying caused by the wind. Faraway a dog snarled, and as an afterthought added a weak warning bark. Otherwise the quarry was quiet. Spider waited. When he was sure he could not hear anything human in origin, he turned on his heels and ran.
All the way back to his car, where he tugged at the door, tossed the baseball bat onto the passenger seat, and jumped into the driver’s seat. The seat was in the wrong position – it had been ratcheted forward. And there was something else different about the car: the smell. The air had become heavy and sweet. Adjusting the rear-view mirror he became aware of the shape of a man sitting on the back seat. “Fuh – ” said Spider. The man on the back seat’s fingers closed around Spider’s throat, and squeezing hard, cut off the final consonant.
“Hello Mickey,” said the man.
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Industry is the sixth track on King Crimson’s 1984 album, Three of a Perfect Pair. It’s an instrumental piece. The album’s the third and final by the 80s version of the band. You can listen to a live version of the track here.
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Just outside The Plough, a pub on Museum Street, I ran into Jimmy Clancy. He is an art collector. He was very interested in portraits and agreed to me taking a few shots of him. This was the first; I took it the moment he agreed. It’s my favourite. Thanks very much, Jimmy! Hope you like your picture.
Richard, this is fine stuff. Well paced and the pay-off is on the money.
Thanks very much. That’s very nice to hear. I can never tell with writing.
P.S. Love the image.
🙂 Thanks!
I’m enjoying this new format you’ve adopted Richard. These posts are very rich and must be quite labour intensive.
I like your writing and I find myself looking forward to the next installment.
Mr Clancy’s double specs are a treat. Excellent portrait, it shows a lot of character.
Thanks very much, Ashley. That’s really nice to know. They are quite labour intensive – the text is taken from an unfinished novel, but I can’t leave well alone and have been editing it quite a lot before posting. Thanks – yes, I loved his double specs too. He was a very interesting, sussed man.
Love the Industry photo. We must’ve been on the same wavelength – I was just listening to King Crimsons RED album on Sunday.
I’m loving these stories also – are they new or are you just posting them now? (just curious)
Cool portrait of Jimmy – for a moment I thought William S. Burroughs was reincarnated. Which then had me re-reading the story with that unique voice in mind.
Thanks very much, Terry. Yes, I often think we must have very similar playlists, ha ha. Red is probably my favourite album by KC – I love the yearning/ rapture of Starless.
I’m really glad you like the texts – they are extracts from an unfinished novel called The Wrongness, but they are also new in the sense that I’ve been heavily editing them for the blog.
Thanks – yes, he’s definitely got the look of WSB. I wish I could do that voice 🙂 It would be great for parties.
Hahaha. “party voice” too funny.
I look forward to the novel. The extracts are really quite good. I’d buy the book.
Nice story! Did you drop the Walkman?! Love the portrait too – a little candid, a little action. 🙂
Thank you, Sir! Ha, no, it just stopped working, so we decided to open it up and have a look inside. I was delighted to discover it seems to utilise elastic band technology! Thanks very much, Richard! 🙂
Always spell-bound with the precision of mechanics. Very thoughtful post, Richard.
The dexterity in your writing and the two pictures, the nuances are sublime.
Yes, I love it that what I took to be at the forefront of tech in the mid-eighties turned out to be reliant on two elastic bands. Thanks very much, Arjun – that’s such a nice compliment. I’m beaming!
Well said Richard. Two elastic bands it is!
I enjoyed your writing, Richard, and look forward to reading more if it. A characterful portrait – great stuff!
I’m really glad you liked it. Thanks very much!
The first image is so perfect. The little wheels turning, starting the next excerpt. Which is fantastic!
“Faraway a dog snarled, and as an afterthought added a weak warning bark.” – Love the ominous moments leading up to the ‘lack’ of a final consonant.
The little wheels stop…
Great portrait, too, it’s brilliant.
Thanks very much, Karen. I’m so glad you’re enjoying these – that’s such a nice comment!
I really love the portrait 🙂 nice shot !
Thanks very much! Really like your blog, Guillaume!
A fully packed post! All immanently enjoyable!
Thanks so much, Elena! I’m really glad you liked it.
Wow, great images and great story. Love the portrait! Has so much character.
Thanks very much, Jennifer! I’m really glad you liked it. Jimmy really was such an interesting man – he knew a lot about light.
ciao! blown away…
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I’m very happy! Thanks very much, TBD!
This is simply fantastic, Richard! Great portrait and story!
Thanks so much, Anette!
Again another great post. I look forward to when you book is finished as I want a copy.
P.S I love the picture of the walkman
Hey, Leon, thanks very much! I’m really glad you like it. The posts won’t be so frequent, because they take a while to put together, but I’m going to do more…
Gripping story Richard, poor Spider, I hope that’s not the end of him . . .
As for the portrait, wow, what a stunner with everything in its proper place and more!
Thanks very much, Patti! I really liked Jimmy – he was really interesting – we talked a lot about portraiture and light. He was great.
Love to know what he has to say and I hope you get to meet up again!
Me too. Hope he gets to see this shot. I’d love to know what he thinks.
Richard…just wonderful! I was talking to a psychoanalyst about silence and found myself quoting your story! Thank you for all your amazing work and talent. I LOVE the portrait…is that one for sale yet?
Wow, thanks so much, Alissa! That’s a lovely compliment. I’m hopelessly disorganised, but I’m sure I can make the portrait available on Etsy (may need to have a word with Jimmy to release rights). Thanks, again!
Wow, Richard. This is great stuff, both the text and images. The excerpt is really intense. I love where it ended today. The portrait of Jimmy is fantastic. Industry #1 is very cool; I can’t stop looking at all the parts.
Thanks very much, Melanie. Glad you like it. Yes, I love it that the walkman was partly powered by elastic band. Jimmy was really interesting – I hope he likes this shot.
This is such a great character shot of Jimmy. Spontaneous, interesting, perfect!
Thanks so much, Cheryl! I hope Jimmy gets to see it.
Love the photos and the richness of the language in this story. I just keep playing around the nuances of this: “The thing about silence is it’s difficult to interpret, and near worthless as a commodity.” I look forward to the next post.
Thanks very much, Lena! I’m really glad you liked it. More soon…